- Good to see you have made a good start at working through your Evaluation questions so far Ben.
- Good incorporation of images, and some creative techniques to communicate your ideas
- Good attempt to make posts visual in some way
ebi:
- Q.2 needs MORE IMAGES in the mini movie - SHOW rather than tell - Use screen grabs from your opening sequence to compare your key characters to characters that have featured in similar films. Discuss the various decisions your group made in terms of representation (clothing / costume, props, posture, gender, age... etc...) Wordle doesn't really communicate much for this post.
- Q. 2 and 3 - Proof read all written posts carefully - Check your use of capital letters and spelling thoroughly - it may help you to type your written posts into WORD first, then do a spelling / grammar check, and then copy in to your blog.
- Q. 2 - Again, needs more relevant images Ben- your opening sequence represents the female in the typical 'Damsel in Distress' manner - perhaps find images of the typical Damsel in Distress from movies (I used some in class the other day) and use these in this post - comparing to screen grabs from your own opening sequence to explain how you have chosen to represent your female character.
- Q. 3 - I would like to see more shots from your film to help demonstrate why it fits with the ethos of Lionsgate'
Effort for Evaluation Q.s 2 and 3: GD
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